This is excellent, Frank, but I did have to read it twice. II. What dreams may come On the winds so slight And change our lives With warming light. What Dreams May Be - In my dreams I'm always hovering. This is a fascinating rhythm… and of course it tastes from dreams. What dreams may come On the winds so slight And change our lives With warming light. All things by a law devine on Apr 21 05:44 PM x edit . Unlike prose, writing composed in everyday language, poetry is considered a creative art and requires a different type of effort and a certain level of depth. ( Log Out / Thank you, Bjorn! Definitely lit a smile with it’s magic. This one evokes feelings more than than meaning, like a cosmic stream of consciousness with rhyme; cool. What dreams may come poem. Wonderful poem, Frank, whatever it means. “Dreaming helps the seeing” Oh yes, and vice versa. Well we’ve discussed this and more opened the lines and opened the door. So divided and undecided, why try to fight it when we can’t hide it, you can’t go showing someone truth they’re not ready for. Like especially ‘seeing Stars shine’. KTECHREBATE.COM. Lost but not forgotten Found again in flight, A ray of hope; A beacon bright. The number one question our editors receive is—what do the editors and judges look for when judging the contest? So first and foremost, be sure your poetry is written using creative language. Really like this poem and the photos are stellar! Commentary and details available https://allpoetry.com/poem/8496593-Fleas-by-Ogden-Nash. In one another's being mingle—. Published by Leigh Hunt, The Indicator, December 22, 1819. by. Love it! Great picture too. ❤ love this line: Like a myth made fact by living. blossomwriter - Thank you, I am very honored and I appreciate this more then you know . 8-2-2017 Thank you, Peter! No sister-flower would be forgiven blossomwriter - Thank you!!! Post was not sent - check your email addresses! I am glad it made you want to dance or read it to someone. This poem seems almost too calming and too innocuous to be about the great After, but maybe that's the point. Allpoetry is home base for poets. Thanks for sharing the week smile by Trent P. McDonald, i ‘ll post it on my whats app status for a while Shayna de Vane - Very deep! I was hoping the rhythm by itself might make sense. Change ). We roam our plains We take our life chances We fix our gaze We make our bold stances. Great line. Reprinted by Mrs. Shelley, Posthumous Poems, 1824. Through despair and darkness And gloom of night, Amid the dawn Sounding our might. There are dreams that we have while asleep and dreams that we have while we are awake. Beautiful rhythm to this, and it does have a dreamlike quality. aS Well..:). When I looked up I saw Venus and then Jupiter – and then I realized that other mysterious dim light, higher up and not in the photo, was Saturn. This can't be viewed by guests - please register or login. Click here to learn how. Sun to KNoW iT All, Smiles The chance to begin again And make things right, To pick up the pieces And dream again tonight. on Apr 21 05:50 PM x edit . I. Sunlight’s setting, fleeing.Deeper darkness cracks decreeingOnce aware now always being, Smiling, feeling all that's true.Like a myth made fact by living,Turning, dawning, lightness giving,Faithful beyond magic, winning Life with understanding too. You have a poet’s soul. Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. This is a beautiful write, Frank. Those of us that dare to put … Enter your email address to follow this blog and receive notifications of new posts by email. I love how you flavor everything! 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And the sunlight clasps the earth, Rich in imagery, imagination and metaphor, these poems punctuate defining moments from a 12-year exploration of language, perception and life. Linked to dVerse Quadrille where De Jackson is hosting with the word ‘crack’. Tiny wounded feet, Profanity : Our optional filter replaced words with *** on this page •, © by owner. It does sound like prancing fairies. The rhythm, phrasing, terseness, the use of verbs, depth of thought…..this is wonderful, Frank. Yeah, seeing those beautiful lights up there is something to smile about. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Like a myth made fact by living. I like the way your poem flows as even the words flow from day to night. Living in the city, I’ve almost forgotten the glorious site of the night sky peppered with stars. Great words and rhyme. Hopefully it brings a positive smile. Enjoyed your almost impressionistic night picture, with the lights, Jupiter and Venus cradled by the rhythm of the verses. Linked to K'lee and Dale's Cosmic Photo Challenge with the theme 'What dreams may come' and … I’m not sure what my poem means. What are all these kissings worth, I love “Faithful beyond magic” – great poem! The Fountains mingle with the river Sorry, your blog cannot share posts by email. Included in the Harvard manuscript book, where it is headed An Anacreontic, and dated 'January, 1820.' Of the thousands of poems entered in each contest, the ones that catch our judges’ eyes are the ones that remove us, even just slightly, from the scope of everyday life by using language that is interesting, specific, vivid, obscure, compelling, figurative, and so on. Through despair and darkness And gloom of night, Amid the dawn Sounding our might. View all posts by Frank Hubeny. What dreams may come What cosmos reflected What masks may change What seasons collected. An inkling hope is an engaging collection of poems inspired by everything from stargazing and backpacking to contemplations existential and interpersonal. To sleep--perchance to dream: ay, there's the rub, For in that sleep of death what dreams may come When we have shuffled off this mortal coil, Must give us pause. In his infamous book De/Compositions: 101 Good Poems Gone Wrong, W. D. Snodgrass imparts, “We cannot honestly discuss or represent our lives, any more than our poems, without using ideational language.”, Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window), Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window), Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window), Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window), Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window), It's raining poetry in Methuen | Merrimack Valley - Eagle-Tribune, Author events and poetry readings around Snohomish County - The Daily Herald, Alexander Blok: A great Russian poet killed by the revolution - Russia Beyond the Headlines, Famous Poet Mehmedalija Mak Dizdar born 103 Years ago - Sarajevo Times, Time review – poetic documentary about a family torn apart by prison - The Guardian, Kriti Sanon channels her inner poet on Instagram, read her beautiful poems - Republic World - Republic World. And the moonbeams kiss the sea— Nothing in the world is single, And the photo too! And yet there was something that made me want to get up and dance too. There are two kinds of dreams. The rhythm does sound dreamlike. These poems vary in mood, tone, voice and form, but this underlying spiritual perspective—this animism—is woven amongst them all. Search. Happy Monday. Change ), You are commenting using your Facebook account. Scattered throughout these pages are the markers and milestones of a long, emotional journey, expressed in ways sometimes abstract, sometimes symbolic, sometimes concrete—but always visual. Such a light and hopeful voice. I agree with Bjorn that there’s a flavour of dreams in the rhythm of your quadrille, Frank, enhanced by the rhymes. Change ), You are commenting using your Google account. The only line that trips me up is the brief Hamlet quote, "What dreams may come." I could imagine sitting reading this to someone I love. There's the respect That makes calamity of so long life. to You too See a poem you like? A cadence reminiscent of prancing fairies… Masterfully done, frank. Smiling, feeling all that’s true. You can publish your own book of poetry for as little as $350! Improve your poetry, create a fan base, and read the best poetry of our generation. on Apr 21 05:55 PM x edit . The chance to begin again And make things right, To pick up the pieces And dream again tonight. In Hamlet, this is a reference to "But in that sleep what dreams may come?" WeeK The winds of heaven mix for ever Not merely emotional, but spiritual—in the animistic sense—for Erin sees all things as possessed of spirit, be it insect or mammal, rock or tree, ocean or wave, city or plain, planet or star, even emotions and principles themselves. What Dreams May Come Quotes by Richard Matheson. Oftentimes, poems are pulled aside for a second look based simply on certain words that intrigued the reader. Very cool. And the waves clasp one another; where Hamlet ponders the eternal sleep we all face. Both kinds of dreams are about the yearnings that are held deep inside us. I am glad you liked that part. Why not I with thine? If thou kiss not me? Poems about Daring to Dream. What is the connection between the two types? Blue, blue with cold, Thank you, Philip! What dreams may come What enchanted childness What far horizon What enraptured wildness. I like yours! Thank you, Robbie! Some of these desires are so secret that we dare not share them even with our closest friends. Even Pluto was supposedly nearby according to the app on my phone. This Thursday at dVerse Meeting the Bar I will be featuring imitation as poetic practice. Thank you, Violet! What dreams may come What earth-rooted … on Apr 21 05:52 PM x edit . What I am imitating here is Tennyson’s rhyme and meter in The Lady of Shalott. Linked to K’lee and Dale’s Cosmic Photo Challenge with the theme ‘What dreams may come’ and to Trent P. McDonald’s The Weekly Smile. Lost but not forgotten Found again in flight, A ray of hope; A beacon bright. Thank you! And the rivers with the ocean, The thing about poetry is that it can mean different things to different people. Starry nights to dawn’s sunlight rays, this is magical. A Topic of This Thank you, Toni! Isn’t it something to smile about when planets converge? Take general ideas and make them personal. Main menu. Is Spiral Around A I may have to revise it to make it clearer since I don’t understand it either.
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